COMMENTS ON MILITARY OCCUPATION FILM version 1 Today is Feb. 25, 2016 At approx. 0:57 Vattel is mentioned, and you show his picture Hence, after this, you need to show the image at 1:37 (which is his book) and add lettering on screen 1758 [ Note: For this date, I am not sure what color would be best, but I like this style of lettering -- http://cooltext.com/Logo-Design-3D-Outline-Textured ] [ Note: If you REPEAT this book image at 1:37, I think this is not a problem. ] At approx. 1:23 add lettering on screen 1625 [ Note: For this date, I am not sure what color would be best, but I like this style of lettering -- http://cooltext.com/Logo-Design-3D-Outline-Textured ] At approx. 3:00 You have two diagrams on screen. However, I think "Annexation" should be in the back, "Military Occupation" should be in the front. At approx. 4:05 Image on screen has Chiang Kai-shek on right side, and here on screen, we need to overlay the words Law of Agency At approx. 4:54 The Table of Data Image at 4:24 should be shown again At approx. 5:17 Image on right side of screen should be replaced with http://www.taiwanbasic.com/rec-temp/mabo/Taiwan_mil-occ.jpg (Note: the Chinese is different) At approx. 6:15 This international law table/chart should stay on the screen one second longer